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de retórica y otros estímulos emocionales

con la vista perdida
abracé un momento
sin volver las vista al equipaje
(pánico y algunas otras modalidades)

te robé la calma
con que desatabas ira
ese cinismo tan benévolo
que desarmaba

te busqué
sólo para que no fueras tú
quien me encontrara
no quiero más noches
para explicarte dos tres veces
que no requiero de libélulas
que tracen nombres al atardecer

deja las palabras
que no necesito de eufemismos
para corromperme
y estos días pasarán
lo mismo adorándote
que sin serte fiel

con la sonrisa en las manos
abracé el momento
sin procurar que me tocaras
(con morbo y algunas otras vulgaridades)

1648 comentarios to “de retórica y otros estímulos emocionales”

viviana says:

que manera tan bella de decirlo carajoooooooooooooo sorprendente. besos.

me gusta eso de las libelulas, que trazan nombres con su vuelo. una imagen bastante poética… en un poema.
no vayas a echarles baygón, nomás digo.

athewa says:

Mi amigo washushushu!… me encantó el cierre!
Y mejor que no se provocó el momento porque si no!… mejor ni respondo.
ptons-ptons!

ruru says:

me gusta mirar las fotos .-…. estan buenas, jeje ais pronto se terminara eso q no me deja libre nada,,, ais ,,!!! petonsssssssss

athewa says:

mmm… en este lugar se acaba la exclusividad de la palabra petons para convertirse en un lenguaje común.
Porqué es más fácil mentársela a alguien que decirle que lo quieres, que besarlo y estrujarlo?…
Porqué nos complicamos tanto?

ruru says:

me gustan las fotos ,,, petons

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